my page of poem things...

[bloodwolf]

Over the past couple days my poetry had been reinspired and I'm messin around with a new style for me. So be honest and say with you think.

I sat with you everyday
and laughed as the days faded away
I wanted to tell you so badly,
but I didn't have the strength.
Then he came,
and he did have the strength.
he said the words, the words I couldn't say.
You were his, and I was all alone.
Now I have found my strength,
and have made a love of my own,
but i still think back to what could have been,
yet each time I find,
I wouldn't have it any other way.


and another one. (I have like ten, but I'll do bout two at a time)


He opens the door and waves goodbye.
I know behind that wave is despise.
I take in the last of my freedom,
because I know the moment that door closes.
All my life will go to hell.
His eyes are already locked on me.
My little bro watches too
both of us ready for the worst.
The door closes and my freedom walks out the door,
taking with him just a guitar, and his own selfish gain.

[S-wo]

Both of your poems are good,but with the second one I think you should've ended it differently. Good job!

[bloodwolf]

yeah I think I should have, but ohh well I've got plent o other ones.


Why do you cry?
is it for those who we have lost?
is it for every day he is gone?
I weep when I think of your pain.
Everytear you shed is three shed by me.
Why is it that you make me feel this way?
Why does your pain hurt me so?
So many times I tried to run,
only to be brought back by thoughts of you.
Why is it that I am bound to your voice?
Am I forever to be a slave to you?
lost in this love forever longing to know,
That you will always love me back...