In the Twist of Her Arms (A poem)

[S-wo]

In the twist of her arms I feel love, warmth, and compassion.
In the twist of her arms I can hear the heart beating of a woman whom has suffered a great misery
In the twist of her arms I can sense the soul of a mother who longs for her child
In the twist of her arms I feel the tough,but soft skin of a valkyrie
In the twist of her arms we watch the sun set
In the twist of her arms she breathes gently down my neck
In the twist of her arms we ponder when our journey will end
In the twist of her arms I can finally rest

[bloodwolf]

nice, but it has a weird line.

In the twist of her arms I can heart beating of a woman whom has suffered a great misery

[S-wo]

oh I just left the word hear out i'll edit it.

[bloodwolf]

ok now it makes sense.

Dude someone else put the on Eoff! I seen this exact poem even with that same error.

[S-wo]

shhhhh... it's a secret.

[bloodwolf]

ummm... ok then I'm lost.