the psychopath in you

[bloodwolf]

This a writting exersise I found on another site try it out tis fun.

You just killed someone.

You killed someone on purpose.

Now you need to hide the corpse.

What do you do?

ok here is mine
There he lay dead on the floor the bat I bashed his head in still buried into his head. The blood circled him in an almost perfect puddle although I would have perfered it to be a little cleaner. Oh well when you kill people for a living your bound to have a mess every once in awhile. Right now I didn't have to put too much focus on hiding the body because I made sure I had him all alone for at least a week. Everyone thinks for the time being he is on vacation and I plan on making it look like the girl thingy just decided never to come back.

My only problem now was ridding the body and any remaining evidence just in case. I had the same kind of gloves that I use at my work which Ironically is to seach rooms for forensic evidence. These gloves are special made not to leave any traces of my fingerprints that way none of the evidence can get messed up or lost. I went straight to work. First thing I had to do was remove the bat. With a few tugs I had the bat out, but that sent more blood across the room and even some in my face, but that was ok I rather like the taste of blood. Anyways I cleaned the body then laid it in the sheet I intended to use when I decided to take put the body. Now I had to clean the room. Which for the first time in a few years made me glad I was a compulsive cleaner. I went straight to work cleaning the floor it took awhile, but it was worth it to hide the evidence. Now two things remained getting the body away, and hidding all the forensic evidence. The body would be simple enough take it down to the park just down the road it was against the law to dig up the ground around there so it would be unlikely to happen.

I waited til late night and snuck in which wasn't easy either, but I managed. I made sure no one could see me then set to work. After alot of digging I had managed to dig up a hole the peferct size for him. " What are you doing. Turn yourslef in" Damn it that voice is back. Always is mocking me trying to control me, but I am my own and I cant afford to listen to it now. I placed the body deep into the hole and re-filled it. Then with a couple hors work set the grounsd back to an nearly perfect replica of the rest of the area. Then I went back to the man's home to finish hidding the evidence.

I went back and this part puzzled me and then it hit me. I would take this case becase in the station I was very influential and claim to have found nothing. Now just in case I removed the plane ticket on his desk so as to insure myself the first week. All I had to do now was wait and hope I got the case if there was one.

[S-wo]

After chopping up the hideous old man and his annoying eye, I decided to stash him in the perfect place. Gathering his body parts and putting them in a bag, I decide to hide him here in his bedroom. I loosen up a floorboard and throw the body down into it. Then re nailing the floorboard back as to not leave any suspension. What is that, sirens I hear, it must be the police, but there will be no worries, I hid the body in a place that they won't be able to find. After they came in they loked at me suspiciously and asked me a lot of questions, what was I doing in the house, have I heard anything, and did I see anyone come during the night. I easily answered all these questions with a no and I lean against the wall to watch the men to attempt to find the body or clues of it, but as you know I hid it perfectly and left no traces. After 30 minutes the police approach me and they said they give up.

At that moment my heart freezes, I suddenly hear a heartbeat, what is it, where is it coming from? the hearbeat grows louder and louder, it's the heartbeat of the old man. The police they must hear it too. As he questions me for the second time, I grown nervous with sweat, I know they're toying with me, they know I did it, they know where it is. The heartbeat grows even louder and louder, I can't take it anymore, i run into the bedromm and pull up the floorboard to show them the body parts of the old man, now I can rest.


I really got this from the Tale Tell Heart, well i couldn't think of anything original at the point, yours is good.

[bloodwolf]

thanx dude I really only spent a couple minutes writting it.